Join the army be a hero
Are you ready for the adventure and excitement in your life ???
Are you ready to challenge yourself in ways you thought where never possible ??
If the answer is yes … then maybe it’s time you started to look at an exciting and rewarding career in the Australian defence force. this is far from a mundane career, there is nothing quite like it. not only will you be set up with free dental and medical, you will also receive tax free pay. these are just some of the advantages and perks of a career in the defence force.
In your training you will be challenged and may find it hard but anything worth doing is hard and the friends you make along the way are people you will know for ever, forging friendships is all part of the defence force and they will help and encourage you to become the best that you can be .
At Kapooka you will have to be prepared physical and mentally for the training is no walk in the park but this is how we will give the best and we will get the best out of you, through this rigorous training regime you will be crafted in to not only new skills but an out standing member of society and a world class soldier .
click the link
http://www.army.gov.au/artc/recruit.cfm
Nice job for first attempt. I would however like to see your text broken up into more sentences by correcting the punctuation. Remember to add a '.' after a long pause.
ReplyDeleteAlso you could improve the readability of your text by letting the reader know what the content is about. We do this by making key text bold or placing sub-headings above new topics (paragraphs).